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Love is a Butterfly's Wing by ~Alien--Kitty:iconAlien--Kitty:





       Wings                                                                                                   Wings
    Pretty things                          Hear                 hear                            Pretty things
   Gossamer like                      I see you^^  I see you^^                    Gossamer like Angels too colorful            Understanding   Understanding           Angels too colorful
To paint with else but         But I do not       But I do not         To paint with else but
The colors of the wind            Know                  know              The colors of the wind
Nothing is more precious          Why                 why            Nothing is more precious
Nothing in all the world             Us                   us                  Nothing in all the world
Could ever compare to this         Us                us              Could ever compare to this
It is love it is love it is love           Us              us               It is love it is love it is love
Unfettered          unknowing         We head we              Unfettered         unknowing
Unconditional always there     Joineyeheadeyejoin         Unconditional always there
Love is a butterfly’s wing        Rainbows in my eyes           Love is a butterfly’s wing
Love is a butterfly’s wing         I do not know much            Love is a butterfly’s wing
Love is a butterfly’s wing         ButIcantryifyouwan             Love is a butterfly’s wing
Love is a butterfly’s wing           Please don’t say               Love is a butterfly’s wing Love is a butterfly’s wing                       No                         Love is a butterfly’s wing
Love is a butterfly’s wing                  Happiness                  Love is a butterfly’s wing
Love is a butterfly’s wing                 Joy and love                Love is a butterfly’s wing
Love is a butterfly’s wing                Please pretty                Love is a butterfly's wing
Unconditional always there            Flowers I only          Unconditional always there
Unfettered          unknowing          Need a little bit         Unfettered          unknowing
It is love it is love it is love           It’s for my babies          It is love it is love it is love
Could ever compare to this          Ifyougivemesome         Could ever compare to this
Nothing in all the world                 IwillhelpyouIwill                Nothing in all the world
Nothing is more precious            giveyouyourbabies^^       Nothing is more precious
The colors of the wind                 You get to see yours            The colors of the wind
To paint with else but   I wish I could see mine          To paint with else but
Angels too colorful                   I like flowers, they are                Angels too colorful
Gossamer like                     Very pretty just like                       Gossamer like
Pretty things                          Me^^ Am I a                              Pretty things
       Wings                               Flower?                                       Wings
©2007-2010 ~Alien--Kitty
:iconalien--kitty:

Author's Comments

This took me FOREVER to make. MS Word is definately not good for making concrete poetry. (Like, the seriously has taken me since March) Oh well. I think it turned out well for all that ^^

DA apparently eats spaceing and stuff if you place it into the text box and I didn't feel like writing it again so I'll just have to hope Da can load the HTML form I'm usuing as a substitute ( DA can't load .doc files :( )

HA! Take that, poetry-eating monster of DA-ness!:P
(HTML didn't work but spending a few hours respaceing it did. Except the right wing is all messed up now. And the body isn't all that good either. Oh well, at least it kinda works again.

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:iconalien--kitty:
so much for that. Lets try this again, shall we?

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The cat is back
:icondreamskaype:
...Wow...

No, it's actually really, really cool like this!!

I mean...okay, so it took me a moment to catch on but...

I honestly thought you wanted it like this XD

It did seem a bit like something you'd do ^^;

But...when I was reading it...I got this image of a kinda broken computer message...like...somebody was entering an abandon, high tech house! And then, and then they stumbled upon this computer and it just started spouting out this poetry that was almost incomplete...yet...not...

Okay, so I didn't imagine the scene like that, but when I was reading this, I could hear a kinda...stuttering, broken-computer voice.

...

DARN YOU! I wanna write...or...draw...or something now -________-;;

...

Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaase keep it like this?


PS
Notepad is good if you're using HTML : P


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I will become the Chuck Norris of writing!

"Kingdom Surplus...lend me your boots!" ~Vokana 'n me!

"I live to admire and be inspired, not to be admired or inspire."

I am not a potato.
:iconalien--kitty:
Sigh....
oh all right.
(I read this AFTER fixing it)

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The cat is back
:iconalien--kitty:
GAH! it ate it even worse than I thought :(

NU~~~~~~~~ D8
....
The DA poetry eating monster has had it's revenge :faint:

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The cat is back
:iconalien--kitty:
IT WON'T LET ME CHANGE IT BACK!!!!!!!!! @_@

LJKSBHFLKHABLKSFLIAHFN:KAEFL*EXPLODESFROMANGERATDAMONSTER*

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The cat is back
:iconcanticum:
O.O
wow, that is really really cool.
just.... wow.
:iconmatt-taylor21:
very interesting=D

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you have value; you are important; choose to be the best you; you can be (just a thought)=D
:icondreamskaype:
Whaa?

Don' go through all that trouble then D:

--
I will become the Chuck Norris of writing!

"Kingdom Surplus...lend me your boots!" ~Vokana 'n me!

"I live to admire and be inspired, not to be admired or inspire."

I am not a potato.
:icondreamskaype:
O.O;;

*holds up dreaded bandaid* ?

--
I will become the Chuck Norris of writing!

"Kingdom Surplus...lend me your boots!" ~Vokana 'n me!

"I live to admire and be inspired, not to be admired or inspire."

I am not a potato.

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